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(Er, am I in the right section? This is new territory for me. :XD: )

The poll revealed you guys did wanna see a teaser panel, so here. P: I worked hard on it but I'm not proud of how the background turned out. Oh and as you can see I changed Kaisyn a bit. Eliminated those green marks because they annoyed me, as well as some others that were a bit too much.

I used this awesome rock tutorial, check it out. [link]

Looks like a peaceful place, eh? That won't last long. >D But I'm not revealing the plot. Lets just say it's not what you guys would expect from a wolf comic. P:

[Edited] Oopsies, forgot to ask for critique.
Art, Kaisyn and Lyariah © Keilidh

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Looks really nice, I think. I mean, I don't have too much room to talk because I could never do anything that lovely. I think the rocks look nice, however they could have been blended a bit more (by his/her paws) to make it look a little less like they're just lines in photoshop. I also agree with *whitewolf16 about the shading -- it's a bit off. Finally, his/her legs... it's hard to tell there is two of them there without the dark brown "sock" marking on the leg. There isn't a line or anything to show the outline of the leg in front. I think if you fixed that, it would look a bit better. But otherwise, I think this turned out really nice. Good work... I look forward to seeing more of your comic. :]
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:iconwhitewolf16:
Overall, this is beautiful. The colours blend well and the character fits well into the background.
I'd suggest practicing rocks on their own and with various grass etc. around them to perfect your style, you used Katikut's tutorial for this? ^^'
It looks like it, anyway, the rock Kaisyn is laying on looks harsher than the one with his shadow on it, the one he's on has visible thin strokes on it, looking a bit more detailed whilst the others are softer and don't have the thin lines on them.

The only other thing is his shadow is the wrong perspective(?). His ears are facing forward toward the reader and his shading indicates the light source is to the right of the panel which means the ears in his shadow should be side-on and not also forwards. The cheek fluff in the shadow should also not be there at that angle, it should be the top of his muzzle and then the top of his leg.

You also didn't add a shine on his eyes, without it they look flat and matte whereas they're actually curved and shiny/glossy.

It really does look beautiful though, I love the colours and his pose. He also looks way better without those green marks. ;D
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:iconimalou:
I can't wait your comic :heart:

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:3 I'll finish page one soon.

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:iconwolf250:
I love that bg :lol:
can't wait for the first pages :)

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Thank you! It took almost two days lol. xD I kept starting again.

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In fact I think I drew that rock in the front 6 times. XD

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:iconabcameronxyz:
THIS IS SICK
i wunna read it
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omg :D well, you finaly came up with a nice rock ;P

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I suck at rock regardless of the tutorial.
Great and awesome job on this.
Can't wait to see more.
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Nah I'm sure you don't suck. In fact, I'll go search your gallery now, find a rock, and prove it. xD
Thanks very much. I'm going to try and pick up the pace with this, and hopefully get page one up in a week, two at the most.

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:iconwhitewolf16:
Fuckkkkkkk.
I love it. <3333

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